On 01/11/2014 23:14, Anne Burgess wrote:
Secondly, if so at fault, what would you middle class liberals
write?

I do not claim or aspire to be a middle class liberal. But since
you ask, here is a list of what I would have written, had I been
so ill-advised as to write it at all.

"Come May next year, we'll see a Tory\UKIP government. The
Labour party"
'Party' should have a capital 'P'

"when they was"
'they' must be followed by 'were'. Or you could have said 'The
Labour Party when it was'

"in government ruined the NHS with PFI's"
There should not be an apostrophe in PFIs

"were"
should read 'where', or better, 'whereby'

"the taxpayer pays 10 times or more what a building is worth.
They allowed the wholesale invasion of this country by
foreigners for a millinenum"
misspelling of 'millennium'

"not seen since the Norman Invasion. Lastly they"
'it' would be better

"ruined the UK economy by spending hand over fist, and thinking
that the great bubble was not going to burst. The labour party"
'Labour Party' should have capital 'L' and capital 'P'

"have made themselves"
'has made itself' would be better

"unelectable for 20 may be"
maybe is all one word, and there should be a comma after 20 and
after 30.

"30 years. Thank God."
I doubt that God has anything to do with it.




Anne you missed out the 's' on the end of 'wait'. Missed out the full
stop after "Come May next year".

Must do better!